Tittle
: Fishing For Jasmine
Author
: John Ravenscroft
Category
: Shot Story
Genre
: Romance
Page
: 2 page
Fishing
for jasmine to tell about the silent young women in bed number six is celled
jasmine. She is down too deep. Since the incident on her father’s fishing boat, since she fell over
board, sank, became engtangted in the nets. It was some time before anyone
noticed, then there was panic. Her father hauled her back on board and sailed
for home. When he finally arrived, he cerried ashore what he thought was his daughter’s body.
Fortunately,
there was a doctor in the village that morning, a young man visiting relatives
it was he who brought this drow end woman back from the brink. She opened her
eyes, lokked up at her father and spoke a single word – then sank again, this
time into coma he touches her hair, kisses her cheek, sit at side of her bed
and holds her hend.
Description
of character not clear. Used language difficult in under standing, to confuse.
So, we must read it again
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used progress story from introduce to arrive end. Curious with this story ? Get
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